作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
English is an international language which becomes more and more important in the modern world. In China, English is taken as a foreign language which many students choose to study. They set out to remember English at an early age and lay out more than one hour to acquire a wide and extensive knowledge of English each day. Even kids in kindergarten have begun to recite simple vocabulary. That's a good phenomenon, for English is essential nowadays. In addition, a group of people think English is superior to the Chinese. In my opinion, although English is great significance, it is a foreign language which is hard for people to see eye to eye after all. English helps us to read original English works, but Chinese helps us to learn a real China. Only by characters can the Chinese literature send off its brilliance. learning country culture, especially its traditional culture,we must incorporate its language firstly . Why do we Chiness abandon our mother tongue and catch on to our own civilization through a foreign language?