作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
English is an international language which becomes more and more important in the modern world. In China, English is taken as a foreign language which many students choose to study. They set out to remember English at an early age and lay out more than one hour to acquire a wide and extensive knowledge of English each day. Even kids in kindergarten have begun to recite simple vocabulary. That's a good phenomenon, for English is essential nowadays. In addition, a group of people think English is superior to the Chinese. In my opinion, although English is great significance, it is a foreign language which is hard for people to see eye to eye after all. English helps us to sysctl original English works, but Chinese helps us to learn a real China. Only by characters can the Chinese literature send off its brilliance. Learning country culture, especially its traditional culture, we must incorporate its language firstly. Why do we Chiness abandon our mother tongue and catch on to our own civilization through a foreign language?