2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

熟练的使用了从句和复杂句；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；文章词汇表达比较丰富，但学术词汇稍显欠缺，此外拼写检查要重视。

Sometimes we usually are find out many plans for study and work,however,it is so easy to make it and hardly to insist on,because whatever who are you,we always without a strong will to do it.It is a reality if we want to successful that is promise of it. when we was a student,we need hard working,till we was a stuff.Only hard working,anyway,we can better to live this world and it is diffcult to be a successful person.Review of history,any great man just own a strong will and insist on them mission,then they can be remembered.Nothing sucessds without a strong will,that is certain he or she can't become a great man in our memory. So,whatever who are you and what identity you are kind of,that is most important to be a great guy.