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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者高级词汇积累做的很棒，但总体词汇丰富度要加强；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误。
Whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact As is vividly portray from the cartoon,the parents are communicate with their child via the Internet.It is well known that the Internet is playing an important role in our daily life and we are more and more rely on it.We are more likely to communicate with others by the Internet rather than face to face.However,is it real that the face to face contact will be replaced by the electronic communications eventually? From my perspective,I think that will never happen.For one thing,the Internet is just a tool that help us communite.Therefore,it is us that use them,instead of their using us.For another,the face-to-face contact provides us with emotional requires,which are never been offered by the electronic communications. All in all,the face-to-face contact rather than the electronic communications will dominate us in the commutions.
