托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第48篇:是否是只有你赢得了比赛才说明参与运动是有价值的

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There are many competitions in our life, these competitions not only include the test of studying, but also some sports competitions. What important for us is not the results of the games, but the process of the games. In my opinion, I think the process of the game is more important than the results. Firstly, in the course of the game, we can learn more important things, such as the unity, cooperative spirit of group and improve our skills.The result is just a test of the previous exercise, even if we failed in the sport games, it doesn't mean we don't have a harvest. Secondly, everybody will have failure. The failure is the mother of success. W e can't give up sports, even if we fail, sports is of value in itself. Admittedly, everyone likes success, but success is not our final aim, it only a result,we should do sports is only because it is benefits for our body