题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足;有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;若注意一些句子错误,文章会更漂亮。
With the world is developing faster,we lose something rare gradually--trust.we begin to suspect the people around us and can't chat with other heart by heart. For instance,many years ago a younger named PengYu and he helped a old man who slipped down,but when the man woke up he didn't say thanks to Peng but said Peng crashed him.Polices began to evident the entire things and provided Peng was a good guy without guilty.Although the thing has been taken place many years but the things left the society a bad influence.Everyone begins to fear to help other,doubt others,and refuse the cooperation. So I want to appeal everyone to open your hearts and treat others sincerely.Only if we do it from ourselves we might have a peaceful surroundings.