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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9032
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

用户的作文(系统评分84.0分
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文中词汇使用较丰富恰当,但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升;从句和复杂句用的不错,但部分句子还有一些小问题。

用户练习作文:

In the chart, a student asks the teacher, holding a smart mobile phone on his hand, "Once I learn how to use Google, isn't that all the education I really need?", while the teacher wants to take a quiz in the class today. Maybe the student is trying to avoid the quiz, but it also exposes a problem. More and more people choose learning in the Internet, it becomes a trend. Nowadays it is much more easy to obtain information than before, people are used to find the solutions to solve the problems through the Internet. On account of convenience and cheap fee, learning in the Internet is welcome by most young people. Some voice arise that the traditional education is going down, but, like the electric books appear in the market, it just brings a new type of products for customers, people have another chance to learn what they want. At the same time, unlike books, education is a series movements, to help to build a unique system for people, to learn the interaction in the world, not just about obtaining information.

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