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邢台二中2012―2013学年上学期高二年级期末测试试卷英语作文

发布时间:2013-05-17 17:27浏览次数:6623
要求:
2010年以来,我国相继发生了几起校园暴力事件,使国人为之震惊,震惊之余,大家都陷入了沉思:我们该如何加强校园安全呢?请你以How to improve school safety为题,写一篇120词左右的短文。
参考词汇:校园campus 保安security guard
用户的作文(系统评分68.0分
评语:

采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;词汇表达较灵活准确,高级词汇使用过少,另外注意文中个别的拼写错误;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误。

用户练习作文:

Since 2010,there have been many violence events in many schools,which really shocked a lot of chinese. So it is important to gurantee the school safety. In the campus, there are many equipments which may cause safety problems,such as many ball games ,up and down stairs ,even some solid from the labrotray.Therefore,the schools should make strict rules to prevent the students from being in danger. Firstly there alwayse be plenty of students after class, we, students must not run or chase somebody on the stairs ,it is really dangerous.secondly, every PE teacher should be responsible for the students .On the playground, we need to do as the teachers tell us .Thirdly ,the schools should make some good security guards guard the gate well. There are also a lot of measures we can take to improve the school safety .But what matters most is we should have the ability to protect ourselves .In a word , we must try our best to improve the school safety.

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