文章层次较为清晰;文中词汇表达使用较丰富,部分高级词汇的使用比较灵活,单词拼写方面要继续努力;简单句比重偏高且句子错误有点多。
Confronted with conciderable information,modean people tends to trust whatever they have heard or read.Is it ture?Absolutely wrong.It is unwise to jump to conclutions upon seeing or hearing something.Because the things we hear or see can not be all right. There are some evidences that we can't judge a thing by some hearsays.firstly,with the developmet of socialty,a mass of people make gossip in order to cheat others,which they can obtain illegal profit.Secondly,the information we have hear or read is one-sided that may puzzled us to make correct decision.on contrast,We are supposed to get a better result.For instance,last april fool's day,a message was conveied to my ear that i am falled the English exam.But i found it was just a joke finnally. consequently,the heard and read is something,the see is everything.
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