2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

丰富从句的使用，文章会更出色；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累；文章用词太过单一，且单词拼写错误较多。

i am very happy for you will come for my hometown,sichuan it's a very beautiful place,and appeal more and more people to visit it's every year. when you come to sichuan,i wille take you visit chengdu,chengdu it's a very beautiful city,and it famouse at food,in chengdu,we can eat a variouty foods