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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40880
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分67.0分
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语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,高级词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查。

用户练习作文:

In our daily life,more and more people usually like to comment something that they just listening or saw,and others will be thought-second then they will decide wheather they talk about or not. For one thing,usually we saw some is that apprent,for example,we saw two people have a fight,one is looked so sadness,and the other looked angry,people often have a conclusion that the looked angry man is fault,but,in fact,we do not know what happened between them,so we exactly do not have a conclusion immediately!For another,people who are have thoughts and intellectual,so when we undergo the same thing,we must thought-scend,if you want to show your intellectual,you shoud becme a quiet person,the quiet is not you do not speak to anyone,that you should not give your conclusion for one thing immediately. In my opinions,I think I am a girl who is impulsive,so I usually have a fault in my life experience.I think I should learn about this thought twice or learn deeply.

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