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A Beautiful City in China In my opinion, Cheng Du is a most beautiful city in China. And it is my hometown. I think you must ask me why I think so. There are three reasons as follows. Firstly, Cheng Du is a historic city. Long long ago, Cheng Du is the center of China in many ages. So Cheng Du is keeping a large number of historic buildings. So many leaders pay more attention to Cheng Du. Secondly, Cheng Du is also a food city because Cheng Du's persons like eating and creating delicious food. For example there was hot pot. At that moment, there is most importance and last reason to making me introduce to you this city. That's because there are hospitality and friendly people. They help everyone who needs to help whether they know or not. If you can come here, you must like this city and don't want to leave. That's my hometown. It is a historical, food city and hospitality city. Welcome to anyone who wants to come here. We are waiting for your coming. If you come here, we serve you in the best way and attitude.
