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字数：300 满分：100分
文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；全文结构较为严谨；简单句稍微有点多，可适当增加从句使用。
With the development of economy,we have ability to buy things what we want.However ,it doesn't mean that we can spend our money without plan.nowdays,it is vital for us to set a reasonable plan to use money,unless how to buy cheaper things. There is no denying the fact that a host of people prefer to buying so many cheap things in the internet.however,it wasn't wisdom.In the one hand,online commodities tend to be cheaper because their cost is low,which frequently tend to the commodities with bad quality. In other hand,there is an old saying that "what price what goods",it will make you spend more extra money to buy a good one. In my opinion,it is high time for us to change our way to spend money.I suggested that we should take a plan which make full use of money and list a paper including the things what we need buy.If only in this way can we become a smart consumer.
