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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33554
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分80.5分
评语:

文章高级词汇使用熟练,词汇表达较为丰富;全文结构较为严谨;若注意一些句子错误,文章会更漂亮。

用户练习作文:

The world is not only hungry but also thirsty.With the increasing concerns about the deterioration of environment,people are calling for economizing water resource. The epidemic of water shortage is brought both by society and by individuals.to begin with,if China wants to be a economic powerhouse,we will have to obtain resource constantly,breaking down an polluting the water.In addition,the desertification caused by the behaviour of cutting tress,contributing to a host of areas have no water.Finally,the wasteof water is one of the bad habit of individuals.A simple example can be drawn from forgetting to turn off the tap after use. The situation,of unchecked,will lead to no water in the word.In conclusion,it takes the effort of both nation and individuals to protect the water,The nation should rule that the factory must to limit the quality of pollution.What's more ,people need to develop the habit of economizing water resource.

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