2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，高级词汇使用过少；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文中衔接词丰富。

I would take her to the place I had gone at my early age.Firstly,I would like to show her to the river near to my house.Although the water is as not clean as before,it is the place where I enjoyed myself once.I want to share my happy time in my childhood to her.In addition,I think maybe I would take her to go hiking in Daren mountain.I hope she could experience my culture.Furthermore,she is likely to be taken to the street in the evening owing to my eagerness to her experience of our hometown's prosperous evening.Plenty of color-lights appear in everyone's eyes.