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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8974
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分71.0分
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文章结构严谨,有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;句式变化较为明显,可适当增加从句的使用;作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量,注意几处拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

As a proverb gose, it is unwise to judge a person by their appearance. Simple as the saying may sound, it aims to deliver the messager that whether a person is wise or not isn't connected with his appearance. A multitude of reasons can account for the phenomenon.Among the reasons, everyone do have bad condition play a significant role. If we judge him in this time, we will make wrong decision. What's more, it is possible that somebady have not beautiful look, which is attracted so that everyone what to aquire, but it does not mean they are unwise. For instance, MaYun, the CEO of Alibaba, which looks not beautiful, is so smart that establish a corporation and make a lot of money.

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