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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8972
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分84.5分
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作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;高级词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

用户练习作文:

As a proverb goes, it is unwise to judge a person by their appearance. Simple as the saying may sound, it aims to deliver the messager that whether a person is wise or not isn't connected with his appearance. A multitude of reasons can account for the phenomenon. Among the reasons, everyone does have bad condition play a significant role. If we judge him in this time, we will make wrong decisions. What's more, it is possible that somebody has not beautiful look, which is attracted so that everyone what to acquire, but it does not mean they are unwise. For instance, Ma Yun, the CEO of Alibaba, which looks not beautiful, is so smart that establish a corporation and make a lot of money. From what we discussed above, we can definitely come to the conclusion that it is unwise to judge a person by their appearance. Only in this way, can we understand people more exactly and find really talented people.

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