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2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

发布时间:2013-08-07 15:58浏览次数:7189
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题目要求:

Today,the quality of life in large cities is decreasing . What are the causes and solutions?

题目讲解:

报告类题目,难度不大,思路要点在于解决方法与原因分析的对应性。

第一段:开头

第二段:原因——环境污染,健康问题,工作压力

第三段:解决——绿色科技+绿化,健康意识+运动设施,学会自我减压

第四段:结尾

用户的作文(系统评分80.5分
评语:

高级词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays the society is rapidly development and technology also can better to help people, but the quality of life is declining in the country. I will discuss the reasons and solutions in the following article. First the main problem is the environment is seriously polluted, which brings lots of environment questions. The environment questions damages the human at any time, specially the large cities, human easier are damaged by the environment question.for example the sweep gas from the cars just the most main pollutant. The person, who live the city, will certainly breathe the sweep gas. Although the car will bring the convenience for he while he breathes the sweep gas. But sometime the traffic jam will more painful. Besides the developing society needs the the person who has high ability and a certain extent experience. The competition is fierce very much as a result, so the people more difficult get the happy in the work. The work of stress gives people a kind of painful and tired life. people have no time to do something what he loves. secondly I think the environment needs lots of time and monies to be solved and some environment questions may not be fully removed from the world. We just only waiting the scientists can make better technologies to improve the quality of environment and we also need to protect the environment by ourselves. Meanwhile we need to do exercise to keep physical health. Facing the work of stress, we should learn keep optimistic and improve self ability. Sometime we also do some things to decompression. To finish up, the quality of lift may be the society influence, but i think we can change the situation by ourselves. just keep optimistic and exercise.

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