2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，高级词汇使用稍显不足；文中衔接词丰富；可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用，注意文中的几处句子错误。

China is a huge country . our country have many different part of cutrual belong different place . my hometown name is shenyang which is near beijing . shenyang is one of the most important city in china , economic , education , population ... but if you want to traveling this city , you should be have to going Downtown of shenyang because that will make you felling modern , young and also you can see many foreign people pass by street .