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Situated in the northern of China, Shanghai,enjoys the reputation of Paris in Asia, is the most charming and beautiful city which I would like to introduce to my foreign friends.Combined with the high-technological city living divicisions and classical architectures of ethnic features, Shanghai can not only relax you by nice buildings and food, it can also amuse you by its unique culture. The Orerntienal Prea TV Tower is the first place I want my friends to visit.It's the symbol of modern Shanghai as well as serves a significant role in Shanghainess daily life, for it control almost 15 precent of TV shows.And for it was built in 1998,it refers to the fast development of this city. Then, the Bund is the next place I want to show to my friends.The classical architectures beside the Bund with various styles from different countries,including Franch,German and England,reflect the changes happened hundreds of years ago,which will giving people the feeling of memory. So what I want to show to my friends refers to the changes about this city,which will give a much clearer idea of what happened in this city and how does it develop.
