小学英语一年级作文：Clocks

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Uncle Brown is a very fanny man, I like he very much. He is one of my father’s best friends. He lives not far away from my home, so I always go to his home to play. He is very found at collection clocks, especially ancient clocks. There are many various clocks in Brown’s house. The biggest one is a table clocks which is placed in the living room. It is already thirty years old. Very old, is it? But it still keeps good time. Uncle Brown told me that he got it from a friend. There also have another clock I adored very much. It is a Wall Clock which placed on the wall of Uncle Brown’s study. It is round with a crimson skin, and some figure carving on the frame. It’s really handsome. There still have lots of clocks which I can’t introduce one by one.I really like to appreciate these clocks and hear Uncle tell me the story of them.