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Uncle Brown is a very funny man, and I like him very much. He is one of my father’s best friends. He lives not far away from my home, so I always go to his home to play. He is very found at collection clocks, especially ancient clocks. There are all kinds of clocks in Brown’s house. The biggest one is a table clock which is placed in the living room. It is already thirty years old. Very old, is it? But it still keeps good time. Uncle Brown told me that he got it from a friend. There is also a clock I adored very much. It is a Wall Clock which placed on the wall of Uncle Brown’s study. It is has a rounded shape with a crimson skin, and some figure carving on the frame. It’s really handsome. There are still many clocks I can’t introduce one by one. I really like to look at these clocks and hear Uncle tell me the story of them.