2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

文中词汇表达多样性不足，在高级词汇方面尤其要多积累；如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

When I was 5 years old. My mother took me to Beijing.I visited many place in Beijing. Such as the place museum, the great wall and the summer palace. When I enjoy these place, I found that my field of vision is more wide. Before I went to Beijing I just thought the world is very small, and there is nothing in the world is very interesting. But when I through these time, I found that it has many interesting place in the world where I did’ t find. The day was a special and meaningful day to me. I enjoyed the valuable memory it left me. I learned a lot. I think I will not forget the special day, and it will be kept in my memory forever.