作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;能够熟练使用从句并合理分配;文章结构严谨,有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。
Sometimes we usually find out many plans for study or work,however,it is so easy to make it but really hardly to insist on,because whatever who are you,we always without a strong will to do it.It is a reality if we want to succeed that is promise of it. When we was a student,we need hard working,till we was a stuff.Only hard working,anyway,we can live better this world and it is difficulty in finishing his mission.Review of history,only a great man own a strong will and stick to their mission,then they can be remembered.Nothing success without a strong will,that is certain he or she can't become a great man in our memory. So,whatever who are you and what identity you are kind of,that is most important to be a great guy.