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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40880
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分76.5分
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作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;文中衔接词丰富。

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If I only have one day to see, what should I do, what is an important thing I want to do, what is the person I want to see? The morning I wake up, I want to see my family at first, looking their faces carefully in case of forgetting them in my life. I want to remember the day that my family spent together. At the same time, I would have a party with my friends that I would remind me of this happy time. I would go down street see look for interesting things to enjoy colorful life before my world becomes dark. I want to appreciate the beautiful flowers, green trees and others in nature. In the evening, I would like to see the bustling night scene and feel the beauty of the artificial light in the dark. All in all, it is the day that I should remember whatever tear or smile. It would remind me that I can not take everything for granted and should be grateful for everything our life.

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