小学一年级英语作文:My dog

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。

Helen is going to write letter to mother. Dad had given Helen medicine. XX wants to sit on the swing. XX kissed Helen. teacher had given Helen peach. XX is will and lying on bed. XX‘s arm was injured. Anna gave lemonade to Helen. The puppy had stand up. Helen is going to write letter to mother. Dad had give Helen medicine.