小学一年级英语作文:My dog

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。

Helen is going to write letter to mother. Dad had given Helen medicine. XX wants to sit on the swing. XX kissed Helen. The teacher had given Helen peach. XX is ill and lying on bed. XX‘s arm was injured. Anna gave lemonade to Helen. The puppy had stand up. Helen is going to write letter to mother. Dad had give Helen medicine.