小学一年级英语作文:My dog

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；建议加强积累过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨。

Helen is going to write letter to mother. Dad gave Helen medicine. XX wants to sit on the swing. XX kissed Helen. The teacher gave Helen peach. XX is ill and lying on bed. XX‘s arm was injured. Anna gave lemonade to Helen. The puppy stood up. Helen is going to write letter to mother.