小学一年级英语作文:My dog

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文中词汇表达多样性不足，在高级词汇方面尤其要多积累；建议增加衔接词和过渡词的使用。

Helen is going to write letter to mother; dad gave Helen medicine; XX wants to sit on the swing; XX kissed Helen; teacher gave Helen peach; XX is ill and lying on bed; XX‘s arm was injured; Anna gave lemonade to Helen; the puppy stood up. The conductor punched my ticket. Dad gave Helen drink of water in car. XX picked fresh flowers for Helen. Anna will buy pretty new cap for Helen. Helen would like to hug mom and kiss her face. Helen feel like to go home. Grandma missed Helen. Good-by.