小学一年级英语作文:My dog

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文中词汇表达多样性不足，在高级词汇方面尤其要多积累；建议增加衔接词和过渡词的使用。

Helen is going to write letter to mother; dad gave Helen medicine; XX wants to sit on the swing; XX kissed Helen; teacher gave Helen peach; XX is ill and lying on bed; XX‘s arm was injured; Anna gave lemonade to Helen; the puppy stood up. The conductor punched my ticket. Dad gave Helen drink of water in car. XX picked fresh flowers for Helen. Anna will buy a new cap for Helen. Helen would like to hug mom and kiss her face. Helen feel like to go home. Grandma missed Helen. Good-by.