2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；文中从句数量过少；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

With the development of the modern society, the Internet has become part of everyday life. Today many people can use the mobile phone and computer to surf the Internet. It leads to some disadvantages. For example, using mobile phone for a long time can lead to eyesight drops. And when you surf the Internet in a work time, you may reduce your efficiency. We should surf the Internet in a suitable way that we can learn knowledge from it. And it also can widen our broaden.