2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，高级词汇使用过少；若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用，文章会更棒；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。

With the development of the modern society, the Internet has become part of everyday life. Today many people can use the mobile phone and computer to surf the Internet. It leads to some disadvantages. For example, using mobile phone for a long time can lead to eyesight drops. And when you surf the Internet in work time, you may reduce your efficiency. We should surf the Internet in a suitable way that we can acquire more knowledge from it. And it can also broaden our horizon. So we should treat the Internet correctly.