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2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:39浏览次数:8754
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题目 Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will
要求
1.坚强的意志是成功的重要保证
2.意志坚定的人才能完成伟大的使命
3.学生也是这样,不刻苦学习,终究不会成为有用之才
字数:120满分:100分
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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;能够熟练使用从句并合理分配;作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多。

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Sometimes,in order to self-discipline and improve self ability,we usually find out many plans for study or work,however,it is so easy to make it but really hardly to insist on,because whatever who are you,we always without a strong will to do it.It is a reality if we want to succeed that is promise of it. When we was a student,we need hard working,till we was a stuff.Only hard working,anyway,we can live better this world and it is difficulty in finishing his mission.Review of history,only a great man have a strong will and stick to their mission,then they can be remembered.Nothing success without a strong will,that is certain he or she can't become a great man in our memory. So,whatever who are you and what identity you are kind of,that is most important to be a great guy.

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