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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9027
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;文中能使用多样的词汇表达,也能较好的使用一些高级词汇。

用户练习作文:

As is shown in the picture, a student who holding a mobile phone speaks to his teacher that I quiz today, once I learn how to use Google, isn't that all the education I really need? What this cartoon symbolically reveals is that people nowadays, especially students are growing increasingly dependent on their mobile phones. Though the internet on learning is changing the way of custom study, education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. Reasons can be interpreted the following two aspects. To begin with, admittedly, internet havs provided more convenience for our life, but it can also make us lazy doing something and thinking. With the long-term depending on internet is lack of the ability of analyzing problems.

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