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How about drop a conclusion at once? If you are a careless man, I think you maybe express your opinion easy without thinking deeply. However, in our life, it is not clever that you drop a conclusion quickly when you see something and listen to it. As to known to us all, seeing does not mean the truth,does the listening.Taking my good friends Nessa for example, she had an experience of misunderstanding. One day, she saw a girl taking one mobiephone from a classmate in the classroom, and the girl asked her friends not to tell others. Nessa assumed that girl was a thief, so she went to tell to the teacher. But finally, the hoster of the phone went hurry and told the truth that her friends wanted to give surprise to her birthday by helping her repair the mobiephone. At last, Nessa understood she made the misunderstanding. From the true story above, we'd better learn to think before our action or dropping a conclusion.
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