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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40875
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分78.0分
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可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

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How about draw a conclusion at once? If you are a careless man, I think you maybe express your opinion easy without thinking deeply. However, in our life, it is not clever that you drop a conclusion quickly when you see something and listen to it. As to known to us all, seeing and listening does not mean the truth.Taking my good friends Nessa for example, she had an experience of misunderstanding. One day, she saw a girl taking one mobile telephone from a classmate in the classroom, and the girl asked her friends not to tell others. Nessa assumed that girl was a thief, so she went to tell the teacher. But finally, the owner of the telephone went hurry and told the truth that her friends wanted to give surprise to her birthday by helping her repair the mobiephone. At last, Nessa understood she made the misunderstanding. From the true story above, we'd better learn to think before our action or drawing a conclusion.

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