语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强。
People usually realize the things though eyes or ears, but also misunderstanding caused of that. The reasons we have here, firstly, we only depending on seeing or hearing is not enough, sometimes, we have to know the whole thing, Why,Who,When is happening. having all of this information then we can fully understand a thing. Secondly, what we have seen though our eyes or ears may not true, it may be by made up or it is not the right time to look it. In a word, if we judge a thing or to understand from what we see or hear, it is not a wise thinking.
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