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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17427
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分78.5分
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色。

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People is connecting with computer tightly in our diary work or life, or even is not be separated. There are good ways for us. Firstly, we can work effective, with a computer, the information forward to another side very soon, we can sit in a office to deal with business, or open a meeting to solve the problems and so on, which is not required to do it in person by traveling. Secondly, we saved a lots of paper,in other hand we protect our environment,with a computer, we don't need to have a document printed as we can read the files by computer. But there is also a bad ways for us. People is getting lazy for that, they don't want to travel to see their friends or parents, especially for young. they would rather to use a computer to have a video connection to say hello. Computer make us closely, but our communication by face to face is far and far.

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