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字数：300 满分：100分
行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；作者能较熟练地使用较丰富词汇，以及部分高级词汇，单词拼写也要仔细。
In modern society ,nobody could live without money.Therefore,money plays an essential part in our daily life.It comes with some debates whether should we be careful with our money.In my point of view,we would better form a habit of saving money.In particular as a student. First and foremost , as a sudent we are unable to earn a living by ourselves,all of our money comes from our parent's hard working.we ought to konw it is not easy for our parents to make a living.The more money we get from them ,the more presuer they have.To think for our parents ,shoudn't we be careful with our money ? What's more ,from our primary school , our teacher has taught us thrift money ,it is a traditional virtue to save money.We should inherit and advoocate it.last but not least,as the international economic tendency is not good ,saving money may help us spent a hard period. Above all ,there is no such disadvantage to prevent us from saving money.As an old saying goes "Success comes from thrift and hard work and failure comes from luxury "
