2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will An old saying goes: where there is a will, there is a way. What this statement reveals is that a strong will is the essensial way to be a successful man. Nothing succeeds without a strong will. Why I insist nothing succeeds without a strong will mainly lies in the following two aspects. To begin with, only having the strong will can we finish the great mission. Such as the founder of Facebook, Mark zuckerberg who spended more than 10 years establishing the famous SNS(Social Networking Services).In addition, so does the student. We must study hard and concentrate on what we need can we are a useful person to our modern society.Last but not least, strong will is a necessary way through succeed. To sum up, it is undeniable that strong will has become an eaaensial element for success. Only with strong will can we finish our missions more easily.