字数:200满分:100分
采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;文章词汇使用多样性不足,且单词拼写错误较多。
Depicted in the cartoon is a noteworthy yet instructive scenario in which supporting each other,two handicapped men are striding for their common destination,lefting their crutches far behind.it tells us that the cooroperation is important. Is it in the world a blessing or curse to our society? what are the positives and negatives of this popular trand?