恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;文中词汇表达较灵活丰富,不过请检查文章的单词拼写。
It's not wise to make conclusions at once according to what you have saw and listened. As the proveb says"what you see is reality".but nowadays,the acting becoming a universe phenomenon in our life.Some example as follows: when you listen something, maybe which is man made,so you should not believe.Also when you see something ,maybe which is he or she acts for you.Are there true?Should you believe? in a words,don't make decision when you don't think fuither about it.
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