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It's not wise to make conclusions at once according to what you have saw and listened. As the proverb says"what you see is reality". But nowadays,the acting becoming a universal phenomenon in our life. Some example as follows: When you listen something, maybe which is man made,so you should not believe. Also when you see something ,maybe which is he or she acts for you. Are there true? Should you believe? in a word,don't make decision when you don't think further about it.
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