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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8977[网页划词已开启]
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分47.5分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文中词汇表达不够丰富,高级词汇方面要多累积;从句使用稍显不足,注意个别句子错误。

用户练习作文:

It is no doubt that we are living in an age when people's appearance have gotten lots of attention from both others and themselves.As a result,appearance has been an important resouce in our society and some of us always judge a person by his or her appearance accordingly instead of his or her character and morality. From my point of view,it is unwise to judge a person by appearance

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