文章衔接手法恰当;作者词汇量有些小,要注意检查拼写错误;能够使用一些简单的从句。
firstly welcome my hometown l am gold to meet you now l guide you my hometown. my hometown is a beautiful place ever l see there have most charming weather flesh air and blue sky . secondly there have many grandplace of everyone will be loved .every year there will attract many people visited