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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8973
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分77.0分
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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用高级词汇。

用户练习作文:

There is no doubt that we are living in an age when people's appearance has gotten lots of attention from both others and themselves. As a result, appearance has been an important resource in our society and some of us always judges a person by his or her appearance accordingly instead of his or her character and morality. From my point of view, it is unwise to judge a person by appearance. The reason why I insist on the point that we should not judge a person by appearance mainly lies on following two aspects. To begin with, one's appearance always doesn't equals his quality.We can learn nothing from his or her appearance. So judging someone by appearance might lead a incorrect impression and cause a series of misuderstandings

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