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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8973
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分86.5分
评语:

高级词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;可适当增加从句的使用;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富。

用户练习作文:

There is no doubt that we are living in an age when people's appearance has gotten lots of attention from both others and themselves. As a result, appearance has been an important resource in our society and some of us always judges a person by his or her appearance accordingly instead of his or her character and morality. From my point of view, it is unwise to judge a person by appearance. The reason why I insist on the point that we should not judge a person by appearance mainly lies on following three aspects. First and foremost, although good appearance is helpful to leave others agood impression in the first meeting, kindness and inner thought is the most important to make friends for all life time. Secondly, many facts reflect that some people with charming appearance do nothing successful, while others without handsome appearance achieve a lot. Last but not least, with the development of science and technology, plastic surgery can change one's appearance, so maybe the people with sourness only alter their appearance but not develop their virtue。 Admittedly, it is unwise to judge a person by their appearance. So people should have more communication with others to find the beauty of their inner thoughts。

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