文中衔接词丰富;采用了一些简单的从句;文中缺乏丰富的词汇表达,但词汇拼写要更加认真。
Strong will is a important guarantee of succeeds people usually say: we will insist to do our dream we loved in this way can we make it come ture. The person who strong will can accomplished the grand missions. sometimes in our dialy life we make ourself better is to insist what should l do and do our best to do something . so stutents should be set up strong will . if you study hard that you never became a person who useful