2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；加强一些长句和复杂句的使用；文章层次较为清晰。

If a foreign friend of my would like to visit my hometown,the Gui Shan.This is famous for Du Juan flowers.It is a very beautiful place.The air is fresh.Believe me,it will let you relaxed. There are three major reasons of my recommendation.First of all,this is a mountain.We could exercise.Then,it has many beautiful scenes.Such as,cloud flowers and big trees.Last and the most important is that has many Du Juan flowers in Feb. To sum up,I hope have a good time for you!