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It does not follow that one put all hopes in one thing. Just like a well-known voice " It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket". This liter can give us a guide to work or life. Why we shoul do like this? At first, it has been known that time is not restare, so we must take several plains for our work. For example, more and more people put digital data into a USB movely, if we put all data into a unique diverce. As a result, we will lose all data if we lose the unique USB. Secondly,